Layout: While the drawing is okay, it sorta ran off the page in a very very awkward manner... after I scanned it in I realized the layout and composition on this are the purest of crap, even if the drawings are okay.

If I ever decide to color my crap, the cunning plan is to make it look like a widescreen image... with the whole black bar on the top and bottom to complete the cheapness.

I'm kinda sorta terrible about backgrounds, which is silly, because all I really need to do is treat the background with the same amount of attention and time spent on the characters... I just... never do that. And I should.
